Chapter 84
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Hua Shui Jun
Chapter 84
The editor informed me that it will be on the shelves tomorrow at 12 noon. Before it goes on the shelves, I will report the results of the next book. At present, when I write the testimonials for the shelves, favorites: 10734, investments: 444, follow-ups: more than 1700, recommendation tickets: 2474, monthly ticket: around 540, the book is listed in the light novel category, the fourth round of intelligent recommendation.
For Pujie who has written millions of words and only received 200 yuan in manuscript fees, this is an unprecedented good result. Here, I am very grateful for collecting this book, continuing to read it, voting for recommendation tickets and monthly tickets, and playing Those of you who have appreciated and rationally evaluated this book, without you, this book might not be the same.
There are indeed regrets, because it takes about 2200 follow-ups for the same humanities to go to Sanjiang. I probably have no chance for this book. I have to say that the light novel genre is probably the most introverted novel at the beginning.
Before putting it on the shelves, there are some problems that I want to explain to you.
I will read almost every comment from book friends carefully. Some book friends questioned that part of the plot in the second grade would lower their intelligence. How should I say this? Some plots really cannot be logically perfect and self-consistent.
Another one, I am indeed a novice writer, lack of experience, and I am not the kind of talented web writer who can become a god in one book, it is also limited by my personal level, but I have never I have learned a lot from your comments, and I believe that as the plot progresses, the eye-catching mistakes and omissions will gradually decrease.
The issue of combat power, the combat power and destructive power of the original work makes it a bit painful for people who are used to the Chinese web text system. For example, why is Dumbledore still so powerful when he abandons the Elder Wand?Just because he knows more spells?That won't be the case, Harry and Dumbledore use the Disarming Curse at the same time, who will be more powerful, it must be Dumbledore, then why? Is it because Dumbledore has a deeper understanding of the Disarming Curse? How to reflect this 'deeper understanding'?
All in all, in order to have a clear positioning of strength, another set of distinction system must be introduced. The approach in this book is to introduce the concept of 'magic power stock' and use 'standard spells' and 'non-standard spells' to reflect How much a wizard understands a spell.
A reader said that many things that can be done in the world of Harry Potter cannot even be done in the high-level magic world. It is more like the high-dimensional reduced to the low-dimensional.
In the later stage, in terms of combat power description, I will probably gradually improve to the combat level of a medium magic world. Otherwise, when the protagonist and Voldemort fight at the end, is it just that one casts the Death Curse and the other fires Fierce?It's kind of boring.
Because of the problem of the starting point, the current plot generally follows the original book, and the subsequent plot will basically maintain the "big event" of each school year without major changes.
However, according to my thinking and writing style, the later the stage, there may be more original plots. For example, the plots of the third grade will probably have many changes. Of course, I think the conception is quite wonderful. I won’t go out of my way. If some readers hope that I can completely follow the plot, I can only say sorry. My idea is that the original book is a main line, and I make up a sub-main line. In the end, two lines When it fits together, of course, it is definitely not that simple. It can even be said that whether these two lines can be combined without logical loopholes will determine the success or failure of this book.
The question of the heroine, many people are interested in this question, and it even shows that whether Hermione is the heroine determines whether they will follow this book, but to tell you the truth, I really haven’t thought it through yet, and take Hermione as the heroine The main character is easy to write, and the plot is easy to write. However, I always feel that I don’t want to worry about this issue. Maybe as the plot progresses, this book will tell me whether Hermione is suitable to be the heroine.
Regarding the question of the sub-main line, it will definitely involve some mythological characters and objects in the British mainland. I have checked some information before, and to be honest, the information is very confusing, and I feel dizzy after reading it.
In fact, many HP colleagues have been involved in this aspect, and there are many very professional writers among them. If I forcefully write according to the original setting, not only may there be many mistakes and omissions, but there is nothing new in the writing. Therefore, after suffering for a while, I decided to only borrow the name and the basic concept setting (or even deviate from it), and the rest will be based on the setting of this book. I hope that when you read this part of the plot later, you can look at those people and people from the perspective of this book. things.
Tomorrow at [-]:[-] noon, more than [-] characters will be issued at one time. Although there are not many, please understand that at the end of the year, I am really busy and dizzy. Now it is [-]:[-] in the evening. , I ran to the small room alone to write my testimonials, and I have to go back to my hometown early tomorrow morning.
Hey, let’s not talk about this, there will be more changes after the Lantern Festival next year. At that time, I will also read the results of this book to formulate a rule of adding changes that I can achieve. I won’t talk about it now, sorry everyone.
I implore everyone to support subscribing to the data. I am the kind of "glass heart" after all. I have to open the writer's assistant at least dozens of times a day to look at the data. If I have a recommendation ticket, my spirit can be lifted for a long time.
Oh, one more thing, some book friends said that the character of the protagonist shown in the first three chapters is very different from that after entering Hogwarts in the later period, and it feels like a babysitter
How should I put it, first of all, I won’t write about babysitters. The problem of personality contrast is actually a manifestation of different environments. Everyone will show different appearances at home, at school, and in the workplace. Maybe I didn’t describe it well. Great, but that's about it.
Alright, that's about all I want to say, I'm too tired to make it through tonight, I wish you all a happy Chinese New Year in advance.
(End of this chapter)
The editor informed me that it will be on the shelves tomorrow at 12 noon. Before it goes on the shelves, I will report the results of the next book. At present, when I write the testimonials for the shelves, favorites: 10734, investments: 444, follow-ups: more than 1700, recommendation tickets: 2474, monthly ticket: around 540, the book is listed in the light novel category, the fourth round of intelligent recommendation.
For Pujie who has written millions of words and only received 200 yuan in manuscript fees, this is an unprecedented good result. Here, I am very grateful for collecting this book, continuing to read it, voting for recommendation tickets and monthly tickets, and playing Those of you who have appreciated and rationally evaluated this book, without you, this book might not be the same.
There are indeed regrets, because it takes about 2200 follow-ups for the same humanities to go to Sanjiang. I probably have no chance for this book. I have to say that the light novel genre is probably the most introverted novel at the beginning.
Before putting it on the shelves, there are some problems that I want to explain to you.
I will read almost every comment from book friends carefully. Some book friends questioned that part of the plot in the second grade would lower their intelligence. How should I say this? Some plots really cannot be logically perfect and self-consistent.
Another one, I am indeed a novice writer, lack of experience, and I am not the kind of talented web writer who can become a god in one book, it is also limited by my personal level, but I have never I have learned a lot from your comments, and I believe that as the plot progresses, the eye-catching mistakes and omissions will gradually decrease.
The issue of combat power, the combat power and destructive power of the original work makes it a bit painful for people who are used to the Chinese web text system. For example, why is Dumbledore still so powerful when he abandons the Elder Wand?Just because he knows more spells?That won't be the case, Harry and Dumbledore use the Disarming Curse at the same time, who will be more powerful, it must be Dumbledore, then why? Is it because Dumbledore has a deeper understanding of the Disarming Curse? How to reflect this 'deeper understanding'?
All in all, in order to have a clear positioning of strength, another set of distinction system must be introduced. The approach in this book is to introduce the concept of 'magic power stock' and use 'standard spells' and 'non-standard spells' to reflect How much a wizard understands a spell.
A reader said that many things that can be done in the world of Harry Potter cannot even be done in the high-level magic world. It is more like the high-dimensional reduced to the low-dimensional.
In the later stage, in terms of combat power description, I will probably gradually improve to the combat level of a medium magic world. Otherwise, when the protagonist and Voldemort fight at the end, is it just that one casts the Death Curse and the other fires Fierce?It's kind of boring.
Because of the problem of the starting point, the current plot generally follows the original book, and the subsequent plot will basically maintain the "big event" of each school year without major changes.
However, according to my thinking and writing style, the later the stage, there may be more original plots. For example, the plots of the third grade will probably have many changes. Of course, I think the conception is quite wonderful. I won’t go out of my way. If some readers hope that I can completely follow the plot, I can only say sorry. My idea is that the original book is a main line, and I make up a sub-main line. In the end, two lines When it fits together, of course, it is definitely not that simple. It can even be said that whether these two lines can be combined without logical loopholes will determine the success or failure of this book.
The question of the heroine, many people are interested in this question, and it even shows that whether Hermione is the heroine determines whether they will follow this book, but to tell you the truth, I really haven’t thought it through yet, and take Hermione as the heroine The main character is easy to write, and the plot is easy to write. However, I always feel that I don’t want to worry about this issue. Maybe as the plot progresses, this book will tell me whether Hermione is suitable to be the heroine.
Regarding the question of the sub-main line, it will definitely involve some mythological characters and objects in the British mainland. I have checked some information before, and to be honest, the information is very confusing, and I feel dizzy after reading it.
In fact, many HP colleagues have been involved in this aspect, and there are many very professional writers among them. If I forcefully write according to the original setting, not only may there be many mistakes and omissions, but there is nothing new in the writing. Therefore, after suffering for a while, I decided to only borrow the name and the basic concept setting (or even deviate from it), and the rest will be based on the setting of this book. I hope that when you read this part of the plot later, you can look at those people and people from the perspective of this book. things.
Tomorrow at [-]:[-] noon, more than [-] characters will be issued at one time. Although there are not many, please understand that at the end of the year, I am really busy and dizzy. Now it is [-]:[-] in the evening. , I ran to the small room alone to write my testimonials, and I have to go back to my hometown early tomorrow morning.
Hey, let’s not talk about this, there will be more changes after the Lantern Festival next year. At that time, I will also read the results of this book to formulate a rule of adding changes that I can achieve. I won’t talk about it now, sorry everyone.
I implore everyone to support subscribing to the data. I am the kind of "glass heart" after all. I have to open the writer's assistant at least dozens of times a day to look at the data. If I have a recommendation ticket, my spirit can be lifted for a long time.
Oh, one more thing, some book friends said that the character of the protagonist shown in the first three chapters is very different from that after entering Hogwarts in the later period, and it feels like a babysitter
How should I put it, first of all, I won’t write about babysitters. The problem of personality contrast is actually a manifestation of different environments. Everyone will show different appearances at home, at school, and in the workplace. Maybe I didn’t describe it well. Great, but that's about it.
Alright, that's about all I want to say, I'm too tired to make it through tonight, I wish you all a happy Chinese New Year in advance.
(End of this chapter)
