Chapter 1859 The quality of current transmigrators is such that not a single one is an ordinary pers

Chapter 1859 The quality of current transmigrators is such that not a single one is an ordinary person.
Ren Tou Gou and Zhen: "To be honest, there's nothing wrong with people who have never been in a relationship writing romance novels. Sometimes, the kind of first love stories written by such people, with their awkwardness, clumsiness, and beautiful fantasies, are actually more flavorful and make people feel more beautiful."

Kazuma and the human-headed dog: "But what you've written is way too long-winded!"

Kazuma: "It's one thing to be slow-paced, but if the plot is interesting enough and the characters are engaging enough, I can tolerate a slow burn; but this one isn't even that interesting!"

Ren Tou Gou and Zhen: "It feels like someone who has never been in a relationship is not writing about their own imagined, romantic love, but is trying to make it 'real' and 'profound'. As a result, what they write is neither real nor interesting, and only feels deliberate and awkward."

This is what Kazuma Sato finds most incomprehensible.

If someone who has never been in a relationship writes a romance novel, how can you write about the kind of romance that people fantasize about, or about romance that is close to reality? But if you've never been in a relationship, how can you write about romance that is real?

Ren Tou Gou Kazuma: "But the most important thing is the change in the male protagonist's character in the later stages."

Kazuma: "Didn't you say before that the male lead is 'close to a realistic teenage boy' and has 'naivety, clumsiness, and sincerity'?"

Kazuma: "Yes, in the early stages he seemed to be someone who was just an ordinary high school student."

Kazuma and the human-headed dog: "But what happened in the mid-to-late stages? Was this guy suddenly possessed by some 'all-around genius'?"

Ren Tou Gou and Zhen: "Music creation comes naturally to them, and their songwriting and composing skills are comparable to those of professional musicians! Their art skills have improved by leaps and bounds, and their paintings are exhibitable! Computer programming is a piece of cake for them, and they can even develop their own software! They are self-taught in video editing and even directing and storyboarding!"

Kazuma: "Good heavens! This isn't some 'reserved and genuine' teenage boy anymore! He's clearly racing towards becoming an 'all-rounder'!"

Human Head Dog and Zhen: "Yes, character growth is correct, but normal growth means becoming more psychologically mature, more resilient in character, and more composed in handling matters."

Kazuma: "Can someone go from an 'ordinary high school student' to a 'cross-disciplinary genius'?"

Kazuma and the human-headed dog: "Is this range correct?"

Human Head Dog and True: "You don't stay true to reality where it should, and you force it to stay true to reality where it shouldn't."

Ren Tou Gou and Zhen: "Readers want to see how an ordinary person who can relate experiences growth and love, not how a 'superman' who suddenly becomes powerful uses his talent to crush everyone else and incidentally falls in love!"

Kazuma Sato almost shouted to express his speechlessness.

This practice of forcibly piling on genius traits in order to highlight the male protagonist's 'charm' is simply treating the readers like idiots.

It completely ruined the tiny bit of realism that had been painstakingly built up in the early stages!
Kazuma: "However, there's one thing I really find strange."

Kazuma: "Even though I said it, the male lead's character has been ruined into a 'superman' and the overall plot development doesn't match the delicate but somewhat awkward style of the early part."

Kazuma: "Logically speaking, this story should have completely fallen apart."

Human-Headed Dog and True: "But why are some parts in the later stages actually much better than the earlier ones?"

Kazuma Sato recalls the later parts of "Love Metronome".

Kazuma and Rentougou: "Especially the interactions between the male lead and the second and third female leads, those are much more interesting!"

Ren Tou Gou Kazuma: "Although the main plot is that the male lead confesses to the female lead but is rejected by her because of the second and third female leads, he then falls into a state of confusion."

Ren Tou Gou and Zhen: "But it's precisely when he's interacting with the second and third female leads that the story becomes more vivid! The banter, the mutual probing, and even the feeling of a bickering couple is so much more natural than the lukewarm, forced, and sentimental interactions between the male and female leads in the early episodes!"

Kazuma: "Honestly, if you completely remove the female lead's storyline and just write about the lighthearted, fun, and slightly ambiguous daily life between the male lead and the second and third female leads, it could easily be considered an excellent campus romance light novel!"

If the male protagonist's character wasn't an ordinary high school student at the beginning, but instead became an "all-rounder" later on, then he could even be considered outstanding.

Kazuma and Rentougou: "So @KasumiShiko, how did you do that?"

Human Head Dog and True: "The overall framework and core character design are clearly flawed, so why are the 'side stories' so well-written? This doesn't make sense!"

Kazuma Sato asked Shizuko Kasumi curiously.

Kasumigaoka Utaha, however, remained silent, neither refuting Sato Kazuma's assessment of her work nor answering her questions.

However, at this moment, those who knew the reason couldn't help but laugh.

An ordinary group admin: "Hahahaha! So that's how it is! I understand now! I understand everything!"

An ordinary group owner: "Hahahaha."

An ordinary group admin: "Oh, I see. Did you change the content after 'Love Metronome' like this? @XiaShizi."

An ordinary group admin: "You didn't even tell us about this."

An ordinary group admin commented: "The main plot is that the male lead confesses his feelings to the female lead but is rejected by her because of the second and third female leads. However, the story actually becomes more vivid when he is dealing with the second and third female leads."

An ordinary group owner: "Hahahaha, you wrote what happened with Su Yan directly into the book, right?"

After seeing Sato Kazuma say that the male protagonist's character became a genius later on, with various skills coming out of his head at will, she realized something was wrong, and couldn't help but laugh when she saw this.

This is clearly Kasumigaoka Utaha writing about what happened between her and Su Yan in the book, and even changing the male protagonist's character to Su Yan.

However, what changed was that after confessing to Kasumigaoka Utaha, Su Yan decisively chose to be friends with Kasumigaoka Utaha and to be in a romantic relationship with Eriri and Kato Megumi, without hesitating or wavering between the two.

The Magician Under the Moonlight: "Did you write about what happened between you and Su Yan in the book?"

The Magician Under the Moonlight: "What does this mean?"

The Magician Under the Moonlight: "And who is Su Yan? There's no such person in the memory copy, is there?"

Kaito Kuroba looked at Su Yunqing's words and said with some doubt.

An ordinary group admin: "I won't talk about this kind of thing."

The ordinary group admin said: "If you want to know the answer, go find it yourself."

An ordinary group admin: "I definitely can't say."

Although Su Yunqing really wanted to share, she knew what she could and couldn't say.

Revealing the existence of "Su Yan" is fine, since Kasumigaoka Utaha herself has already collaborated with "Su Yan," and people might recognize him in the future. However, directly revealing Kasumigaoka Utaha's "failed love story" is not acceptable.

They'll have to find the answer themselves.

The Magician Under the Moonlight: "Understood, I'll check the chat history now."

A genius among loners: "Got it, I'll go check the chat history now."

Himouto! Umaru-chan: "Got it, I'll go check the chat history now."

Erina Nakiri: "Understood, I'll check the chat history now."

Human Head Dog and Zhen: "Understood, let's check the chat history now."

He boiled Daigo into soup: "Got it, I'll go check the chat history now."

The richest man in the city said: "Got it, I'll check the chat history now."

Kasumi Shiko: "Hey, hey, hey! It's one thing for these newcomers to join in the fun, but @Himouto!Umaru-chan, @Erina Nakiri, @Take Daigo to Soup, @Lighthouse Richest Man, you guys clearly knew what was going on, so why are you all here repeating the same thing?!"

Seeing the chat group instantly flooded with "Got it, I'm going to check the chat history now," Kasumigaoka Utaha finally couldn't help but chime in again, her tone tinged with embarrassment and helplessness.

It was embarrassing enough that her little secret in the novel was exposed in public, but these guys who love to watch the drama were actually "fanning the flames"!
However, before Umaru, Erina, and the others could respond, Kazuma Sato, who had already quickly browsed through the relevant chat history, let out a series of exclamations mixed with shock and sudden realization:

Kazuma and the human-headed dog: "So that guy named Su Yan is a time traveler?!"

Kazuma the Head-Dog: "He managed to make Eriri and Megumi both fall for him, and they can even get along peacefully?!"

Kazuma and the human-headed dog: "Utaha-senpai, if you hadn't joined the chat group, you probably would have been won over by him too?!"

Kazuma: "Even now, you still can't forget him?!"

Kazuma the Headless Dog: "Hiss~~~!!!"

Kazuma Sato couldn't help but gasp. If he were certain this was real, he would have thought he was listening to a fan fiction story.

It's understandable that a transmigrator, relying on their foresight of the "plot" and their own abilities, can thrive in another world and even build a business empire.

But
"This charm is outrageous! This isn't just 'popular', it's practically 'succubus' level!"

"How can two main female characters willingly share a boyfriend?"

"How can someone as sharp-tongued and tsundere as Kasumigaoka Utaha still harbor special feelings for him even after she has 'jumped out of the script' and gained the advantage of a chat group?!"

"Just what kind of monster is this Su Yan?!"

Are all transmigrators like the group leader and Bai Xuan this exaggerated?
An ordinary group admin: "Actually, it's not that exaggerated."

An ordinary group owner said: "Eri and Megumi may seem difficult to win over, but in reality, for those who are truly familiar with the plot and their personalities, it is not that difficult to win them over."

An ordinary group owner said: "Especially when Su Yan himself is outstanding enough."

An ordinary group owner said: "If they can like Aki Tomoya, they can naturally like Su Yan, who is countless times better than Aki Tomoya. Moreover, Su Yan's feelings for them are pure and without any self-interest."

The ordinary group owner said: "Shiyu is the same in this respect, or rather, because of the various stories Su Yan created after his transmigration, she should be the first of the three to fall in love with Su Yan."

An ordinary group owner said: "If Su Yan hadn't clearly stated that he wouldn't give up on Kato Megumi and Eriri, Shiyu would have been lost for nothing."

In Su Yunqing's opinion, winning over Kato Megumi and Eriri is not easy, but if you have the right conditions and know them very well, it is not a difficult thing to do.

Kato Megumi is calm, composed, and has very little emotional fluctuation. She possesses extraordinary observational skills and rationality. She always appears unperturbed, speaks calmly, and even has a touch of "sharp-tongued" sarcasm.

However, Megumi Kato's inner world is extremely rich.

She longs to be truly "seen" and "understood," but chooses not to interfere most of the time. Once she makes a decision, she demonstrates remarkable drive and persistence.

Eriri is a typical "tsundere" personality. In public, she is an elegant and talented young lady; but in front of familiar people, she becomes easily shy, says one thing but means another, gets emotional, and is even a little clumsy.

She has a very strong sense of self-esteem and competitiveness.

Despite this, deep down there lives a little girl who longs for recognition and fears loneliness.

She has a very high pursuit and self-respect for the identity of "creator", regards creation as a part of her life, and is easily moved by pure passion, talent and unconditional support for her dreams.

With Kato Megumi, you need to be able to accurately capture her subtle, easily overlooked expressions, notice her at first glance in a crowd, and constantly express your care for her and how she treats you differently.

The best way to pursue her is to become a part of her life, and you must never rush things.

She needs to observe you for a long time to determine your true feelings.

Every time you appear, every time you interact, you are like throwing a pebble into the calm lake of her heart; the ripples will eventually turn into waves.

To get close to Eriri, you need to use a relatively direct approach to understand her inner world; her works are the best reason to do so.

If you can demonstrate enough talent, even to the point of becoming a part of her path to achieving her dreams, then the rest will fall into place naturally.

Of course, despite saying that, Su Yunqing was only talking about it theoretically; she had no idea how Su Yan had managed to do it.

Kasumigaoka Utaha hadn't said anything about this, only that Su Yan had used a few insignificant methods to drive her and Aki Tomoya further and further apart.

Kato Megumi is too insecure, and her low self-esteem makes her value people who can always notice her. Su Yan is too outstanding, which makes it impossible for her to have the idea of ​​possessing him exclusively.

It can only be said that the quality of transmigrators is too high. In any case, among the transmigrators who have appeared so far, Su Yunqing felt that there were very few ordinary transmigrators.

The vast majority of time travelers can be described as incredibly "outstanding".

Even someone like Su Yan, who doesn't have a system, still managed to reach the pinnacle of life in the world of "Saekano: The Rise of a Nobody's Girlfriend" by relying on his memories from his previous life and his own talents.

Now, are there requirements for the abilities and mentality of time travelers?
(End of this chapter)