Chapter 356 Calvin, please leave for 1 day
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Xiao Shi Yi Mo
Chapter 356 Calvin, please take a day off
Let's talk about the book!To be honest, this book was opened with the enthusiasm of the Immortal Dao Evergreen. At the beginning of writing, I was not used to this way of writing, and I couldn’t start. I admit that this book has many shortcomings. It was written like a lone ranger at the beginning, but with It’s just about the family, and later when I wrote about the young generation, I vaguely understood the difference between the family cultivator and the lone ranger. To be honest, I have read all the family articles at the beginning, but I didn’t read them carefully. I mainly read the comments of readers. Some readers asked why the pig-footed family always exterminates other families, while other families are obedient.
I can't help but think, why can the pig's foot family rise up, but other families can't, burning, killing and looting?Fighting openly and secretly?What the Zhujiao family can do, why other families can’t do it? Some people want to say, you are writing online articles, not Red Chamber, do you have the level to write Red Chamber?I admit that I can't write it, but the things I send out have to pass my level first. In fact, the next plot is the roles of Wang Changping, Wang Changhuan, Wang Qingqi, and Wang Changyue. Wang Changyue is the protagonist's sister. It's not finished, so there's no plot next?No, there is, but I don't think it's appropriate. For example, Wang Changping discovered a certain ancient monk's cave, and the Hui tribe invited the same tribe to break the formation. Isn't Wang Changyue used for this?Or Wang Changping was seriously injured and needed to refine some kind of elixir, wouldn't Wang Qingqi be used for this?Or find a certain spiritual mine, go all out to fight with other families, which requires the use of formation masters and alchemists, or discover secret realms, open dungeons, these plots are all fine, I think family stories!The most inspirational thing is the plot before the alchemy.
Why do other families keep being submissive? When I get to Zhujiao’s family, there are spirit stone mines and metal veins. I also wrote about this kind of plot, but I suppressed it more severely. I didn’t give Zhujiao’s family much benefit. I’m enough to suppress Zhujiao. Otherwise, you can get a third-level demon pill, casually refine a few foundation-building pills, and you can have a few more people from the foundation-building stage, or discover ancient monks' caves and get magic tricks, but isn't it too easy? up?I don’t think I can write a classic, but I want to write a family essay that I recognize. I can write when I discover metal mines, spirit stone mines or secret realms. The problem is that this is the early stage, a critical moment for the rise of a family , and then the pie falls from the sky, 10,000+ two 10,000+ spirit stones fall?I might as well write The Lone Ranger!
The whole family worked hard, deducting the expenses, and the annual profit was only a few thousand spirit stones, and then the author opened the golden finger, and the pig's foot family occupied a spirit stone mine or a metal mine?A dozen or even hundreds of thousands of spirit stones fell from the sky all at once?I can't accept it myself. I can write like this in the later stage, but I can't in the early stage.
I sat for a long time today and conceived a lot of plots, but I just couldn’t pass this level. Why can’t other families rise up, and the pig’s foot family rises, so I cut off a lot of plots, and I plan to write about farming honestly, starting from farming, no I have been farming, there will be fights, I just don’t want the Zhujiao family to be too against the sky, and the train of thought has not been cleared up. I remember that when I was writing Yifu, a book friend who read it wrote a long comment, saying that Xianxia wants to write about love Hate and love, not fighting and killing. You can fight and kill, but not often. As long as I write fairy tales, I will always remember this book friend's comment.
This book still has many shortcomings. I admit that I didn’t say that other family articles are not good. Don’t spray me because of this. The above are all my personal opinions. I’m not proud, but I want to be responsible for this book , that's all,
I forgot to change it to a testimonial. I'm sorry for the friends who subscribed. I will post a free chapter tomorrow. Sorry.
(End of this chapter)
Let's talk about the book!To be honest, this book was opened with the enthusiasm of the Immortal Dao Evergreen. At the beginning of writing, I was not used to this way of writing, and I couldn’t start. I admit that this book has many shortcomings. It was written like a lone ranger at the beginning, but with It’s just about the family, and later when I wrote about the young generation, I vaguely understood the difference between the family cultivator and the lone ranger. To be honest, I have read all the family articles at the beginning, but I didn’t read them carefully. I mainly read the comments of readers. Some readers asked why the pig-footed family always exterminates other families, while other families are obedient.
I can't help but think, why can the pig's foot family rise up, but other families can't, burning, killing and looting?Fighting openly and secretly?What the Zhujiao family can do, why other families can’t do it? Some people want to say, you are writing online articles, not Red Chamber, do you have the level to write Red Chamber?I admit that I can't write it, but the things I send out have to pass my level first. In fact, the next plot is the roles of Wang Changping, Wang Changhuan, Wang Qingqi, and Wang Changyue. Wang Changyue is the protagonist's sister. It's not finished, so there's no plot next?No, there is, but I don't think it's appropriate. For example, Wang Changping discovered a certain ancient monk's cave, and the Hui tribe invited the same tribe to break the formation. Isn't Wang Changyue used for this?Or Wang Changping was seriously injured and needed to refine some kind of elixir, wouldn't Wang Qingqi be used for this?Or find a certain spiritual mine, go all out to fight with other families, which requires the use of formation masters and alchemists, or discover secret realms, open dungeons, these plots are all fine, I think family stories!The most inspirational thing is the plot before the alchemy.
Why do other families keep being submissive? When I get to Zhujiao’s family, there are spirit stone mines and metal veins. I also wrote about this kind of plot, but I suppressed it more severely. I didn’t give Zhujiao’s family much benefit. I’m enough to suppress Zhujiao. Otherwise, you can get a third-level demon pill, casually refine a few foundation-building pills, and you can have a few more people from the foundation-building stage, or discover ancient monks' caves and get magic tricks, but isn't it too easy? up?I don’t think I can write a classic, but I want to write a family essay that I recognize. I can write when I discover metal mines, spirit stone mines or secret realms. The problem is that this is the early stage, a critical moment for the rise of a family , and then the pie falls from the sky, 10,000+ two 10,000+ spirit stones fall?I might as well write The Lone Ranger!
The whole family worked hard, deducting the expenses, and the annual profit was only a few thousand spirit stones, and then the author opened the golden finger, and the pig's foot family occupied a spirit stone mine or a metal mine?A dozen or even hundreds of thousands of spirit stones fell from the sky all at once?I can't accept it myself. I can write like this in the later stage, but I can't in the early stage.
I sat for a long time today and conceived a lot of plots, but I just couldn’t pass this level. Why can’t other families rise up, and the pig’s foot family rises, so I cut off a lot of plots, and I plan to write about farming honestly, starting from farming, no I have been farming, there will be fights, I just don’t want the Zhujiao family to be too against the sky, and the train of thought has not been cleared up. I remember that when I was writing Yifu, a book friend who read it wrote a long comment, saying that Xianxia wants to write about love Hate and love, not fighting and killing. You can fight and kill, but not often. As long as I write fairy tales, I will always remember this book friend's comment.
This book still has many shortcomings. I admit that I didn’t say that other family articles are not good. Don’t spray me because of this. The above are all my personal opinions. I’m not proud, but I want to be responsible for this book , that's all,
I forgot to change it to a testimonial. I'm sorry for the friends who subscribed. I will post a free chapter tomorrow. Sorry.
(End of this chapter)
