Summary at the end of the volume

Let me briefly report the results first.

The current data is still normal, with both subscriptions and follow-up subscriptions rising steadily.

The average order is 7,200, which is a lot higher than the first order, and the collection has exceeded 50,000.

Thank you very much readers for your support.

There are also the big guys who silently cast monthly votes every day. Although many of them seldom speak, their IDs are very familiar to me. Thank you again.

Orz

In addition, I rarely delete comments or ban comments except for those that are rhythmic or irritating.

There are even several long reviews in book circles. Although they criticize me, I have also refined them.

I feel that since I have written so many reviews, I must also be readers who have carefully read the plot.

Regardless of whether I personally agree with these suggestions or criticisms, I would like to thank you for your support of this book.

Summarize the second volume.

Let’s talk about the simulation plot first.

Unlike the first simulation, this one involved too few core characters.

For the first time, there was a scene between Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, but this time, the main plot involved at the beginning was to train Zhu Zhuqing.

Unless I try Zhu Zhuyun's setting again, I still feel it's not very interesting.

However, after writing this, I found that this setting is a bit too thin.

In order to avoid hydrology and running accounts, I accelerated the progress of the simulation plot as a last resort.

The main reason for this situation is that the detailed outline setting is taken for granted and the details are not considered enough.

This point will be corrected and optimized in the plot setting of the next volume, and the character conflicts will be made as intense as possible.

Then there is the real main plot.

There is not much of a problem with the progress of this part.

From Zhu Zhuqing, to Qian Renxue, to the meeting of the three of them, everything was sorted out.

The relationships between the characters are basically displayed relatively clearly here.

Including the first collision between the two heroines, as well as A Yin's change in concept due to the catalysis of the soul ring incident.

With the help of an opportunity created by Su Cheng, Zhu Zhuqing got on Bibi Dong's line through his own efforts, which also balanced the gap in strength between himself and Qian Renxue to a certain extent.

As for what happens next, both of them are aware of each other's existence now, and it depends on their respective actions.

Going back to the Soul Master Competition itself, I feel that neither the battle process nor the final outcome is particularly important.

At least not so important that I need to sacrifice rationality to trick the protagonist in order to win in the end.

The core plot of this book is not a show-off, it is just a sub-level adjustment.

If you write something original, this part of the text will definitely be emphasized.

But for fellow Douluo fans, to be honest, pretending to be a slap in the face is already written badly, and there is no need to win the final championship.

There was no audience, and the final was held behind closed doors. Only the academies of both contestants and a group of big guys were present. The protagonist himself performed well enough, and he had finished all the pretense, and that was enough.

What's more, Wuhun Palace itself is not a hostile force, and the protagonist's purpose in participating in the competition at the beginning is just to show his strength.

The climax of the reality line is actually where you get the soul ring.

However, this part is not particularly well written, and it feels like it lacks a lot of warmth, but everything that needs to be written is still written.

Finally, let’s talk about the controversial plot.

One is Zhu Zhuqing’s simulation. Summary: I have already reflected on it at the beginning. This paragraph does lack some consideration in plot setting.

The other one is the A Yin line.

If you want to write this emotional line, you must have a strong dose, otherwise it will be difficult for Ah Yin to realize his true thoughts in terms of character design.

The main problem is that there is not enough foreshadowing. This plot should be handled better.

Then there are a few areas where the main characters are more controversial. Let me briefly talk about my thoughts.

If a harem novel wants to create a character for the female protagonist, it needs to weaken the male protagonist to a certain extent and overemphasize the male protagonist without sacrificing the personal characteristics of the female character.

Unless there is no harem and only one female protagonist is written, then if the male and female protagonists play against each other, the two people will get along with each other in a more balanced way, similar to the situation between Su Cheng and Qian Renxue in the first simulation.

Or write an imaginary ancient background, three wives and four concubines are a normal world view, and the heroine can easily accept it, that's okay.

But if you write about Shura Field, there will be at least two relatively strong and important female characters.

This is determined by the worldview and background. A heroine with personality will not easily accept the sharing of feelings.

It's a matter of choice.

When I first started writing this book, I set the tone and designed the characters of the main female characters.

I really didn’t want to be reborn in that masterpiece by Lao Liu. Chen Hansheng was scolded in it. (I don’t mean to compare myself with great masters, I’m just taking this classic urban harem novel as an example. After all, this book is deeply rooted in people’s hearts)

Isn’t Chen Hansheng rich enough? Is your social status not high enough?

Why are Xiao Yuer and Shen Youchu unwilling to accept his harem?

Without this kind of independent personality, would these two heroines still be liked by so many readers?

Those who say it’s because the protagonist is not strong enough are quite interesting.

This is like keeping several people in reality because you have money. Are these people with you for love or money?

Or do you think that as long as the protagonist is invincible, given the character of Qian Renxue in this book, he will be allowed to have a harem at will?

Who would be willing to share a female character with a real independent personality with others?

This is not like the ancient worldview of the Three Cardinal Principles and the Five Constant Principles, which was deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. It was normal for a man to have three wives and four concubines.

Why do you think so?

Even if the protagonist is invincible, others just don't want to share it.

Because what they are looking for is not the strength of the protagonist, but the person.

If you want to read about mindlessly recruiting girls, you can go directly to the stallion novels. There are many female characters in them, and they don’t care if the protagonist hugs each other and is happy to see each one.

In addition to the reasons mentioned above, the character's character background must also be considered.

Just because you don’t want to share, doesn’t mean you can’t share, and you have to share it with others.

If this matter were applied to A Yin in the book, or to a strong-minded person like Hu Liena, it would be true.

But it is unreasonable to put it on Qian Renxue in this article, or on Xiao Wu in the original work.

Qian Renxue can die for the protagonist, or she can die with the protagonist. To put it more exaggeratedly, she can walk around the world holding Brother Cheng's head, but she just won't accept the appearance of another person.

(Of course, the above is only the current situation.)

As for Zhu Zhuqing, she is somewhat different from Qian Renxue.

Her emotions are not as morbid as Qian Renxue's, and her current conditions in all aspects are weaker than Qian Renxue's, so she will be calmer, think deeper, and the methods she uses will not be directly exposed.

But those need to be written later.

The reason why so many comments are so biased is because some of them are simply pointless, making pointless arguments and looking for bugs while looking at the plot, which is ridiculous. (Not AOE, I read all normal comments, and I haven’t banned or deleted those who don’t brush the screen or spray in a rhythm)

I have never used this account for writing books before. The account I use for reading books sometimes makes me want to add a few words to each chapter.

But I was afraid that I would be accused of using a trumpet and oboe, so I never commented. To be honest, it was really uncomfortable.

Next volume: Poseidon roars.

Main characters: Bo Saixi, Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, A Yin.