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I have read the comment,
Some chapters say that the typos mentioned in it have basically been changed. If you haven't changed it, you haven't seen it. I won't delete too much if you delete the review. There are good reviews and bad reviews. If they are deleted, they are probably official.
Tell me about the more problems that the comments say,
First is the problem of too many levels.
Many people have responded that there are too many small realms, saying that it will be very procrastinating, but in fact, I set these small realms to be something similar to a progress bar to show the protagonist’s small progress. A small breakthrough will pass in two or three days. Like some early online articles, from the initial peak to the mid-term card, dozens of hundreds of chapters, it is extremely difficult to break through like a great realm. There is no good analogy in the first place.
Breakthrough is easy, no matter how many settings are set, it doesn't matter, otherwise, just like Lu, the realm will fly to the sky in a few days, then this book is still a fart.
Next is the question of perception,
The protagonist's talents are average, that is beyond doubt, the genius can master the magic and martial arts three or four times, the protagonist may have to practice dozens or hundreds of times to get started, and the genius meditates for an hour, and the efficiency may be comparable to the protagonist's practice. Three hours.
As for frequent epiphanies, I actually have a setting for this,
But it’s a long story. If you write it all down in one chapter and you talk about flooding, I will explain it later when I find a suitable plot.
In short, the protagonist is set to be an ordinary person, an ordinary salted fish traverser in the new century.
Finally, there is a sentence problem,
At the beginning, one sentence and one paragraph was to cultivate a concise narrative. If you can write one paragraph, don't use three paragraphs or four paragraphs. As a result, many people responded that it seemed uncomfortable, so I changed it later.
As a result, you have seen it.
The narrative is not concise,
I used to pour water into sentences and plot plots, but it almost became a flood. A ring fight wrote me four or five chapters, which became protracted and lengthy.
Clearly use concise language to write roughly two or three chapters, and the rhythm is just right to finish the ring battle, and finally it is top-heavy.
Many people behind talk about water, which is largely related to my change of writing.
So it doesn’t matter,
I’m not writing in RMB, it’s impossible to make everyone like it, and then I’ll change back to the previous concise narrative style.
will certainly improve a little bit, but I will change the overall style back to the previous one.
This style itself is actually a typesetting suitable for mobile clients. If you like it, continue to support it. If you don’t like it, I can’t help it.
that's it.
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