Chapter 912 Change of Speech
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Feng Liu Xiao Er
"Secretary Qin and I don't want to say anything like this anymore. If you have anything to do, just give me direct instructions."
"I have a brother. When I was working in Shannan County Economic Development Zone, he was the director of the Economic Development Zone Police Station. Later, I left Shannan and joined the municipal party committee, and he was transferred from the police station to work in the county bureau. It is said that he is a little unhappy at work now and wants to be transferred to the Municipal Bureau. See if the Forestry Bureau can help with the transfer?" Qin Feng said politely.
Lin Xingzhi did not reply immediately.
"If Bureau Lin finds it difficult, just pretend I didn't say anything." Qin Feng smiled.
"No, no, no, Secretary Qin misunderstood me. It is not difficult to transfer. Although I am transferred from the county bureau, I still have this ability. I am thinking if this brother is temporarily seconded directly in the name of the headquarters. Wouldn't it be more direct and convenient to come and work at the headquarters? Once the exercise is over and the headquarters is disbanded, I can justifiably keep him in the city bureau."
"In addition, if the exercise is a great success and this brother performs well in the exercise, he will be able to be more flexible and proactive in arrangements." Lin Xingzhi said with a smile.
Qin Feng immediately understood what Lin Xingzhi meant. Lin Xingzhi not only agreed to transfer Peng Wei, but also prepared to create opportunities for Peng Wei to be promoted. This was a huge favor for Qin Feng.
"Then I'd like to trouble Bureau Lin. Do you have time in the evening? Let's have a drink together?" Qin Feng asked with a smile.
"You have seen this situation now. It is really impossible to leave. It is not good to go out to drink and eat at this time and be seen by others. After the exercise is over, I will definitely eat Secretary Qin's meal. Secretary Qin, we are currently Please ask Secretary Qin to think of more solutions to the difficulties." Lin Xingzhi held Qin Feng's hand.
"Don't forget, I am also the liaison officer of the headquarters." Qin Feng said with a smile.
Qin Feng returned to the municipal party committee, had lunch with Zhou Qiming, and then went upstairs with Zhou Qiming.
Qin Feng knew that Zhou Qiming was taking a lunch break at noon, so he thought of reporting the drill to Zhou Qiming before Zhou Qiming took a lunch break.
"Secretary Zhou, over at the exercise headquarters..."
"I'll report on the headquarters affairs later. I'll take a rest first. You can hurry up and revise tomorrow's speech and give it to me." Zhou Qiming interrupted Qin Feng.
After Zhou Qiming said this, Qin Feng couldn't say anything anymore. After leaving Zhou Qiming's office, Qin Feng sat in his own office, not resting, nor having the mind to rest, smoking one cigarette after another.
Writing a speech is not difficult. Although he has never done this kind of writing work, he has been a leader for a few years, so he still understands political text formats and speech routines. The most important thing in his office is various documents. It is not difficult to pull out a few documents at random and pick out the commonly used words in them to piece together a copy. In addition, he is also a college student from a prestigious university. Although he has never done any writing work, his skills are not too bad.
What troubled Qin Feng was not how to write the speech, but how to write it in a way that fit Zhou Qiming's wishes.
Just as Qin Feng had wondered before, the quality of the speech written by a group of professional writing secretaries and reviewed and corrected by Xu Rengui himself must be very high. Qin Feng may not be able to reach this level even if he practices for another five or six years. But Zhou Qiming was not satisfied, which meant that this speech was not in line with Zhou Qiming's wishes.
Moreover, Zhou Qiming did not ask Xu Rengui to change it, but asked Qin Feng to change it. This shows that Zhou Qiming believed that Xu Rengui could not change the meaning he wanted to express.
What exactly does Zhou Qiming want to express in this speech?What kind of thoughts does Zhou Qiming want to convey at this exercise mobilization meeting?Qin Feng believed that this was the basis for revising his speech.
Thinking of this, Qin Feng felt that he had grasped the context and understood what Zhou Qiming meant.
If you want to understand what Zhou Qiming wants to express, you must first understand Zhou Qiming's purpose for holding this exercise. Regarding this, Qin Feng thought that maybe no one in the entire Dongyang City knows better than him. This may be Zhou Qiming. The reason why he must be asked to revise this speech.
After thinking about this, Qin Feng came to carefully study the speech that Xu Rengui had reviewed and which dissatisfied Zhou Qiming.
After reading it, Qin Feng understood why Zhou Qiming was dissatisfied with this speech.
This speech is of a very high standard, and the wording is also very good. However, the entire speech feels like it is just general talk, full of common clichés, and not very targeted.Of course, the most important thing is that although this speech emphasizes the need to uphold the party's leadership, the emphasis is not particularly profound, and this is precisely the real purpose of Zhou Qiming's holding this exercise.
After studying the speech several times, Qin Feng had an idea in his mind. There was nothing wrong with the speech itself. He only needed to emphasize two points. The first point was to adhere to the leadership of the party and the municipal committee for this exercise. The highest and only leadership institution is the core of the entire speech. This is the most critical point.
"I have a brother. When I was working in Shannan County Economic Development Zone, he was the director of the Economic Development Zone Police Station. Later, I left Shannan and joined the municipal party committee, and he was transferred from the police station to work in the county bureau. It is said that he is a little unhappy at work now and wants to be transferred to the Municipal Bureau. See if the Forestry Bureau can help with the transfer?" Qin Feng said politely.
Lin Xingzhi did not reply immediately.
"If Bureau Lin finds it difficult, just pretend I didn't say anything." Qin Feng smiled.
"No, no, no, Secretary Qin misunderstood me. It is not difficult to transfer. Although I am transferred from the county bureau, I still have this ability. I am thinking if this brother is temporarily seconded directly in the name of the headquarters. Wouldn't it be more direct and convenient to come and work at the headquarters? Once the exercise is over and the headquarters is disbanded, I can justifiably keep him in the city bureau."
"In addition, if the exercise is a great success and this brother performs well in the exercise, he will be able to be more flexible and proactive in arrangements." Lin Xingzhi said with a smile.
Qin Feng immediately understood what Lin Xingzhi meant. Lin Xingzhi not only agreed to transfer Peng Wei, but also prepared to create opportunities for Peng Wei to be promoted. This was a huge favor for Qin Feng.
"Then I'd like to trouble Bureau Lin. Do you have time in the evening? Let's have a drink together?" Qin Feng asked with a smile.
"You have seen this situation now. It is really impossible to leave. It is not good to go out to drink and eat at this time and be seen by others. After the exercise is over, I will definitely eat Secretary Qin's meal. Secretary Qin, we are currently Please ask Secretary Qin to think of more solutions to the difficulties." Lin Xingzhi held Qin Feng's hand.
"Don't forget, I am also the liaison officer of the headquarters." Qin Feng said with a smile.
Qin Feng returned to the municipal party committee, had lunch with Zhou Qiming, and then went upstairs with Zhou Qiming.
Qin Feng knew that Zhou Qiming was taking a lunch break at noon, so he thought of reporting the drill to Zhou Qiming before Zhou Qiming took a lunch break.
"Secretary Zhou, over at the exercise headquarters..."
"I'll report on the headquarters affairs later. I'll take a rest first. You can hurry up and revise tomorrow's speech and give it to me." Zhou Qiming interrupted Qin Feng.
After Zhou Qiming said this, Qin Feng couldn't say anything anymore. After leaving Zhou Qiming's office, Qin Feng sat in his own office, not resting, nor having the mind to rest, smoking one cigarette after another.
Writing a speech is not difficult. Although he has never done this kind of writing work, he has been a leader for a few years, so he still understands political text formats and speech routines. The most important thing in his office is various documents. It is not difficult to pull out a few documents at random and pick out the commonly used words in them to piece together a copy. In addition, he is also a college student from a prestigious university. Although he has never done any writing work, his skills are not too bad.
What troubled Qin Feng was not how to write the speech, but how to write it in a way that fit Zhou Qiming's wishes.
Just as Qin Feng had wondered before, the quality of the speech written by a group of professional writing secretaries and reviewed and corrected by Xu Rengui himself must be very high. Qin Feng may not be able to reach this level even if he practices for another five or six years. But Zhou Qiming was not satisfied, which meant that this speech was not in line with Zhou Qiming's wishes.
Moreover, Zhou Qiming did not ask Xu Rengui to change it, but asked Qin Feng to change it. This shows that Zhou Qiming believed that Xu Rengui could not change the meaning he wanted to express.
What exactly does Zhou Qiming want to express in this speech?What kind of thoughts does Zhou Qiming want to convey at this exercise mobilization meeting?Qin Feng believed that this was the basis for revising his speech.
Thinking of this, Qin Feng felt that he had grasped the context and understood what Zhou Qiming meant.
If you want to understand what Zhou Qiming wants to express, you must first understand Zhou Qiming's purpose for holding this exercise. Regarding this, Qin Feng thought that maybe no one in the entire Dongyang City knows better than him. This may be Zhou Qiming. The reason why he must be asked to revise this speech.
After thinking about this, Qin Feng came to carefully study the speech that Xu Rengui had reviewed and which dissatisfied Zhou Qiming.
After reading it, Qin Feng understood why Zhou Qiming was dissatisfied with this speech.
This speech is of a very high standard, and the wording is also very good. However, the entire speech feels like it is just general talk, full of common clichés, and not very targeted.Of course, the most important thing is that although this speech emphasizes the need to uphold the party's leadership, the emphasis is not particularly profound, and this is precisely the real purpose of Zhou Qiming's holding this exercise.
After studying the speech several times, Qin Feng had an idea in his mind. There was nothing wrong with the speech itself. He only needed to emphasize two points. The first point was to adhere to the leadership of the party and the municipal committee for this exercise. The highest and only leadership institution is the core of the entire speech. This is the most critical point.
