Chapter 60 Feedback on this book and today’s update

As the title states, I just woke up.

Today’s 4,000 words are still being written and may not come out until tonight.

Then let me tell you another piece of news. There are four rounds of recommendation for Qidian’s new book, PK mechanism.

It is currently in the first round of recommendations. This book has received the second round of recommendations next week, but the third round of recommendations is hopeless.

The editor has arranged to put it on the shelves on Monday, that is, charging will start on the 20th.

(This is basically a consensus. New books that meet certain standards will be put on the shelves immediately and are arranged by the editor.)

It will be on the shelves the day after tomorrow. I hope readers can subscribe.

Even if you want to buy a book, just make an initial subscription, it only costs a few cents.

If the first order is over 500 yuan after it is put on the shelves, I will be prepared to give back everyone's support every month. If the performance increases, I will continue to order 10,000 yuan a month until the book is completed.

(This is an effort, after all, it takes a lot of brainpower.)

Then let’s talk about feedback.

The most popular feedback received so far is ‘Luo Li Ba Suo’ and ‘Taishui’

To be honest, I am not sure why I was scolded like this. I have been asking for advice in the author group in the past few days.

A big boss said that it should be because there are too many psychological activities and too many explanations.

You must give a reasonable explanation for everything you do.

The starting point is good and it allows readers to understand my thinking clearly.

But when it appears more often, it becomes a sentence of dialogue with several lines of explanation below it, and then another sentence with another explanation below it.

This will look awkward to readers, so my advice is to use moderation.

At present, we are already preparing to solve this problem and see how to write it without so many explanations.

However, due to the mechanism of the starting point,

It is basically impossible to delete too much of the first 100,000 words of content, and it will be judged as insufficient and full attendance will be cancelled.

For Poujie, perfect attendance is too important.

Then there is the issue of PS.

The first failure is the artificial intelligence with intelligence. I will find time to delete the plot of worshiping Mr. PS later.

Then there is the issue of PS speaking a lot.

Some people think this question is good, and some people think it is inappropriate. Let's put it aside for a while and see the feedback.

In the meantime, try to keep it out as little as possible.

Another piece of feedback is the development of the protagonist’s ability system. Some readers scolded me for not knowing what I was writing.

Some people also talk about some kind of template switching to increase the protagonist's combat power but also suppress it.

Let me briefly talk about the idea here. The protagonist's current abilities are all based on the dimensional roulette, because the accumulated number of cards in his hand is too small and there is no way to develop any interesting abilities.

This is why there is template switching, because cool operations require template switching to be developed by the protagonist.

For example, Tom and Jerry's frightening trumpet sprays on the protagonist with seven templates, and it directly splits into seven people.

Beat one of the seven, like this.

It's equivalent to a clone technique.

Or Dragon Ball's fitting earrings, which are suitable for the protagonist with dual templates. Spray the Horror Horn and then put on the earrings to fit with yourself.

Therefore, it is not that the protagonist has no desire to develop, but that the cards currently accumulated are not enough.

Then, the template can be integrated into seven parts in a logical manner.

This is probably the author's idea, and it is also the main development direction of the protagonist's physical ability.

So it’s not that there is no development prospect, it’s just that it hasn’t been shown yet.

In addition, there is the skill system of the Sharingan and the equipment system of Minecraft. These are the strength components of the protagonist.

I already have an idea.

As for the indestructible boy's body, I actually plan to give it up.

The reason for not being able to improve is to make it logical to give up. After all, this skill was originally positioned as a transitional skill.

Then there are issues such as not writing down the attribute list and adding the word count.

The author will read the comments, but will delete the comments after the problem is recorded. I am afraid that it will affect my writing.

The above is probably the author’s summary of the current situation.

If I make a mistake, I can correct it if I can.

There are some things that cannot be changed, such as a ship selling for 3 million Baileys, and I can't do anything about the text that has already been sent out.

Because there are so many things involved, it may take several days to revise it.

If there are readers who are still dissatisfied with the author and feel that there are problems with this book, my suggestion is not to embarrass each other.

Qidian.com is a huge website, and there is always a book that suits you, the big boss.

--Finish.