Chapter 3319: Can you tell the truth?

He is about to be sixty years old, and when he starts a business, he has no energy or physical strength, and the most important thing is not to make money, but to educate six children so as not to let them go on a crooked road.

　　 Therefore, investment and financial management is the most convenient and fastest way. Not only can we achieve asset appreciation, but we will not be short of money for the rest of my life.

　　 turned off the computer, took the card to check out.

　　 Two yuan for half an hour, four yuan for two computers, a deposit of 20, and a change of 16 directly.

When 　　 came back, I passed the vegetable market, bought watermelon, bought some fresh meat and wonton wrappers, and ate wonton at night.

　　Bai Wenli woke up from a nap, went downstairs, and saw her on the table. She thought her mother and stepfather hadn’t watched it at all, and she was discouraged.

　　 walked to the front, Bai Wenli saw the red writing on it.

　　Bai Wenli was very surprised. Did my mother and stepfather really have to modify her?

　　Bai Wenli took them out and read them carefully one by one, especially the places marked with red pen. At first, she didn't think her mother and stepfather could make constructive comments, but after careful consideration, Bai Wenli realized her shortcomings.

　　 In some places, she felt awkward when she saw them, and they were all selected; in some places, she found it very good, especially the description of people's service, character descriptions, very beautiful, but they were rejected by her mother and stepfather.

　　 She is not convinced!

　　Bai Wenbin is not very appreciative, so he went downstairs with the manuscript and said to Bai Wenli, "Second sister, can I tell the truth?"

　　 He has seen a lot before, especially martial arts, which is his favorite. The moves and the protagonist's grievances and hatreds are very substituting, but the second sister wrote, there is no desire to read it, let alone a sense of substitution.

　　Bai Wenli rolled her eyes, "Failure is the mother of success. As readers, give me advice from the reader's perspective."

Bai Wenbin first pointed to a large section of description, "I know you want to highlight the beauty of the heroine, but I think it is too complicated, so I swept it away. The plot behind it is a long time, obviously it is a martial arts man, happy. Qiu, you wrote so terribly, anyway, I'll just read the first two chapters, and I can't read it later, and I fell asleep."

When Bai Wenli heard this, she blushed, "Hey, it is really bad writing, three books were rejected, and a few poems were rejected. I really don't have the talent for writing. Then I will give up. I like not to be able to eat. When I was in school, I still had the qualifications for willfulness, but when I graduated, I couldn't even support myself. Wouldn't it be necessary for my parents to support it?"

Seeing Bai Wenli's loss, Bai Jingxuan turned her wheelchair and approached Bai Wenli, "Second aunt, don't be discouraged. Who is born to write? It's all about practice. Practice makes perfect. You can get into such a good university to prove your learning ability. It is very strong, and the knowledge reserves are sufficient. Now we have found out your shortcomings, and you have corrected them, won't you make progress?"

　　 Bai Wenfang also hurriedly encouraged. She knew that her second sister liked it very much. When she used to go to school, she could save one-third of the money for lunch every day, which she used to rent. Afraid of being known by my parents, hiding under the covers.

　　 I liked it before, but now I like to write. Since she likes it, she doesn't want her second sister to give up.

　　 "Yes, Second Sister, don't give up easily." Bai Wenfang encouraged, "Second Sister, I think your writing is a bit old-fashioned. Now the times have changed and you can't write with old eyes."